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axanar_sporking [2018/03/05 22:53]
Carlos Pedraza adds link to Jody's review
axanar_sporking [2018/05/08 18:18] (current)
Carlos Pedraza ['Axanar' Lite]
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-**AxaMonitor**:​ How good are the prospects for Axanar Lite™ as a shortened version of this story in the faux documentary format of Prelude to Axanar? ((The lawsuit settlement allows Peters to make two 15-minute episodes comprising the //Axanar// story; he must do so without any public crowdfunding.)) \\+**AxaMonitor**:​ How good are the prospects for [[Axanar Lite]]™ as a shortened version of this story in the faux documentary format of Prelude to Axanar? ((The lawsuit settlement allows Peters to make two 15-minute episodes comprising the //Axanar// story; he must do so without any public crowdfunding.)) \\
 **Stark**: One of the consistent weaknesses in //Axanar// is that the script favors telling over showing. ​ The faux documentary format of //Prelude// will turn that weakness into a strength. ​ Additionally,​ I don't see any challenge in fitting the Axanar story into thirty minutes. ​ The [version] 7.3 script is inflated by constant repetition, frequently we get the same information from both the Starfleet and Klingon perspectives. **Stark**: One of the consistent weaknesses in //Axanar// is that the script favors telling over showing. ​ The faux documentary format of //Prelude// will turn that weakness into a strength. ​ Additionally,​ I don't see any challenge in fitting the Axanar story into thirty minutes. ​ The [version] 7.3 script is inflated by constant repetition, frequently we get the same information from both the Starfleet and Klingon perspectives.